|2nd prompt ~ Vita|
2nd prompt ~ Vita
Apr. 22nd, 2004 @ 10:26 pm
Two lines in this were exceptional to me:Never wanted to be the girl who sat in the shadows with wet eyes and bruised thighs
The image and the rhythm support each other beautifully.
I feel this as I read it.Silence is the slayer and I am the feline bandit that stole my own tongue.
Thankyou!!( I too quite like my silence line) It's still in infancy...I am not yet completely happy with it, but by sticking it up there, I am able to sit back from it a little and be a little more objective about where it needs...air brushing.
That is a brilliant line. You play with words so well, I am positively entranced by this. I cannot wait to see how you develop this entry.
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