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2nd prompt ~ Vita - It's Like Montparnasse All Over Again

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Date:April 22nd, 2004 06:00 am (UTC)
Two lines in this were exceptional to me:

Never wanted to be the girl who sat in the shadows with wet eyes and bruised thighs
The image and the rhythm support each other beautifully.
I feel this as I read it.

Silence is the slayer and I am the feline bandit that stole my own tongue.
Wonderful metaphor.
Date:April 22nd, 2004 04:47 pm (UTC)
Thankyou!!( I too quite like my silence line) It's still in infancy...I am not yet completely happy with it, but by sticking it up there, I am able to sit back from it a little and be a little more objective about where it needs...air brushing.
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Date:April 24th, 2004 01:16 am (UTC)
That is a brilliant line. You play with words so well, I am positively entranced by this. I cannot wait to see how you develop this entry.
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