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2nd prompt ~ Vita - It's Like Montparnasse All Over Again

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From:fireriven
Date:April 25th, 2004 10:41 am (UTC)
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Should it be "sarcasm dripped tongue" or "sarcasm-dripping tongue"?

There are definitely some powerful images in this piece. I think you worked the prompt line in really well, by the way.

A little polishing of grammar and spelling, a little more development, and I think this is a highly intriguing piece.
From:orange_velcro
Date:April 25th, 2004 04:43 pm (UTC)
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Ooh,I am so glad you brought that up! Actually I am not sure that 'dripped' was the best choice. Perhaps it should be sarcasm laced tongue? I'm not sure, it was one of the parts I wasn't happy with.
As for my grammar and spelling, this tends to slide when you forget to proof read!
I often find myself scratching my head with the spell check button, seems odd that we speak the same language but spell things so differently. I look at the suggested corrections and go but hey I spelt that right! Until I remember that Americans have their own unique spelling of English words! And that I am yet to move with the times and adopt the US dictionary, that and I have an awful habit of being a dyslexic typist! (Which again comes back to the all important point of checking your work!)
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