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2nd prompt ~ Vita - It's Like Montparnasse All Over Again

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From:orange_velcro
Date:April 25th, 2004 04:36 pm (UTC)
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Thank you! No I haven't read her. (To be honest I have never heard of her, but you have me intrigued....what would you reccomend I read?)

"For example, "...rain drenched October night like a thousand tiny teeth of glass" is beautiful. I think the part about it's bite is inherent in the first image you paint, so the next is too much sugar on the berries."

I think you are right that I don't need the part about "biting through my soul". I will keep that in mind when I make alterations.
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